At its core, a developmental edit answers one deeper question: What is holding your manuscript back, why, and how can it be strengthened?
Our developmental editing package evaluates every element of your story—character, plot, pacing, arcs, romance (if any), and overall story development to identify strengths and uncover areas for improvement. In short, we provide a clear roadmap for revision to strengthen your manuscript.
Unlike a beta read, developmental editing doesn't simply identify where readers struggle. It explains why and provides detailed recommendations for how to strengthen the manuscript's structure, emotional arcs, pacing, character development, and overall storytelling. It is, effectively, a comprehensive diagnosis of your entire manuscript.
This service is ideal for authors who want more than reader reactions—they want a professional editorial roadmap for revision.
Starting at $0.035 per word
Booking: A 20% deposit of the total cost is required to secure your developmental editing slot.
Over 100,000 words? Fill out this form to get a custom quote.
What you'll receive:
“Alexa makes the entire editing process comfortable. She’s like a long lost friend with invaluable editing expertise. Pricing is very competitive! I had reached out to various editing companies and overall Luna Imprints was the best option based on pricing, offerings, personality, & knowledge. Alexa helped me to improve my novel to a degree I never thought possible. I’m so thrilled with Alexa’s kindness, knowledge, and patience and I plan to hire Luna Imprints again for my next novel. No matter what level of editing you require, you need Alexa and her team!”
Author of Me & Eryn Carlo, Grace's Knitties, and Second Chance chick lit novels
Pricing is in US dollars and is subject to change. Manuscript length and complexity can lead to additional charges. We will always contact you before proceeding in such cases.
We do not accept manuscripts with a poor mastery of the English language. If you are unsure, please send us the first chapter of your work. Any misrepresentation of the complexity of your novel will lead to your order being cancelled.
Unless otherwise specified on your invoice, turnaround for the majority of our packages is 3-4 weeks. We can accommodate urgent requests, but there will be an additional rush fee. Please contact us in advance.