Developmental Editing

Developmental Editing

Our main focus will be the storyline, worldbuilding, character development, pacing, structural issues, etc. Includes an editorial report.

Is this service right for you?

To help your novel reach its full potential, a comprehensive, unbiased review is essential. Our developmental editing package evaluates every element of your story—character, plot, pacing, arcs, romance (if any), and overall story development. We work alongside you to identify strengths, uncover areas for improvement, and guide your manuscript toward its best version.

This package includes:

  • In-text edits, tracked changes, and comments in your manuscript
  • A detailed editorial report highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions
  • Critique exceeding industry standards
  • Basic copy/line editing
  • Basic proofreading
  • Two 30-minute Zoom consultations to discuss your feedback and next steps
  • Discounts on follow-up editing services (e.g., proofreading or subsequent editing packages for the same novel)

Our expertise, cost, and turnaround time

Genres:
Fantasy, romance (including paranormal), young adult (romance, dystopian, fantasy), and thrillers
Cost:

Starting at $0.035 per word

Booking: A 20% deposit of the total cost is required to secure your developmental editing slot.

Over 100,000 words?

Fill out this form to get a custom quote.

Turnaround:
2 weeks or less for a novella (60K words and under)
3-4 weeks for a novel (60K-120K words)
4-6 weeks for large novels (120K+ words)

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What authors say about us

“Invaluable Editing Expertise”

“Alexa makes the entire editing process comfortable. She’s like a long lost friend with invaluable editing expertise. Pricing is very competitive! I had reached out to various editing companies and overall Luna Imprints was the best option based on pricing, offerings, personality, & knowledge. Alexa helped me to improve my novel to a degree I never thought possible. I’m so thrilled with Alexa’s kindness, knowledge, and patience and I plan to hire Luna Imprints again for my next novel. No matter what level of editing you require, you need Alexa and her team!”

Connie Chyle Rossner

Author of Me & Eryn Carlo, a chick lit novel

IMPORTANT NOTICES
Pricing

Pricing is in US dollars and is subject to change. Manuscript length and complexity can lead to additional charges. We will always contact you before proceeding in such cases.

English Proficiency

We do not accept manuscripts with a poor mastery of the English language. If you are unsure, please send us the first chapter of your work. Any misrepresentation of the complexity of your novel will lead to your order being cancelled.

Turnaround

Unless otherwise specified on your invoice, turnaround for the majority of our packages is 2-3 weeks. We can accommodate urgent requests, but there will be an additional rush fee. Please contact us in advance.