Developmental Editing

Developmental Editing

We provide in-depth editorial feedback to help strengthen your novel’s structure, character arcs, pacing, worldbuilding, and emotional impact.

Is this service right for you?

At its core, a developmental edit answers one deeper question: What is holding your manuscript back, why, and how can it be strengthened?

Our developmental editing package evaluates every element of your story—character, plot, pacing, arcs, romance (if any), and overall story development to identify strengths and uncover areas for improvement. In short, we provide a clear roadmap for revision to strengthen your manuscript.

Unlike a beta read, developmental editing doesn't simply identify where readers struggle. It explains why and provides detailed recommendations for how to strengthen the manuscript's structure, emotional arcs, pacing, character development, and overall storytelling. It is, effectively, a comprehensive diagnosis of your entire manuscript.

This service is ideal for authors who want more than reader reactions—they want a professional editorial roadmap for revision.

Our expertise, cost, and turnaround time

Genres:
Fantasy, romance (including paranormal), young adult (romance, dystopian, fantasy), and thrillers
Cost:

Starting at $0.035 per word

Booking: A 20% deposit of the total cost is required to secure your developmental editing slot.

Over 100,000 words?  Fill out this form to get a custom quote.

What you'll receive:

  • A comprehensive editorial report highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions
  • In-manuscript comments and tracked feedback
  • Actionable revision recommendations
  • Basic copy/line editing
  • Basic proofreading
  • Two 30-minute Zoom consultations to discuss your feedback and next steps
  • Discounts on follow-up editing services (e.g., proofreading or subsequent editing packages for the same novel)
Turnaround:
2-6 weeks depending on novel length

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What authors say about us

“A rare gem in the editing world”

“Alexa is a rare gem in the editing world. Trusting her with my YA fantasy novel felt like a welcomed hug throughout the process, which then turned into an incredibly encouraging push toward the publishing journey. Nearly one hundred thousand words were combed through with Alexa’s obvious talent and care. From the first meeting, she understood the meaning behind this book, and with remarkable integrity, carried that in her work. I am beyond grateful, and cannot wait for her to care for my future projects like a mother for a child, a surgeon for a heart, or a talented editor for a literary dream.”

Barbara Kvelstein

Author of Agnes and the Locket of Secrets, a YA fantasy novel

IMPORTANT NOTICES
Pricing

Pricing is in US dollars and is subject to change. Manuscript length and complexity can lead to additional charges. We will always contact you before proceeding in such cases.

English Proficiency

We do not accept manuscripts with a poor mastery of the English language. If you are unsure, please send us the first chapter of your work. Any misrepresentation of the complexity of your novel will lead to your order being cancelled.

Turnaround

Unless otherwise specified on your invoice, turnaround for the majority of our packages is 3-4 weeks. We can accommodate urgent requests, but there will be an additional rush fee. Please contact us in advance.